maybe this time did a better job of keeping the original attitude/pose? or maybe there was just less attitude to start with in this drawing than the other one i posted. still think the original has more energy... not really sure why i'm doing these...
just felt like doing something more rendered... i'm really slow at this... i like some aspects of it but probably as is usually the case the original sketch has more appeal and reads better too
it wasn't supposed to take place in modern day, he was just supposed to be very average looking. but then i just drew him with a belt and a jacket... and he suddenly became too good looking to be average.